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Parenthetical direction should be used sparingly.  It may be intrusive for a writer to suggest how an actor should play a line.  Indeed, some vagueness may even be preferable, as it gives the actor and director some latitude to interpret the emotional subtext.  That being said, parenthetical direction is sometimes necessary to clarify the character's intent.

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Parenthetical direction should be treated as a separate element, placed on a line all to itself.  As with all screenplay elements, parenthetical direction should not be centered on the page.  Instead, it should appear in its own margins, approximately halfway between the margins for dialogue and the margins for character cues.  The standard setting puts the left parenthesis 3.6 inches from the left of the page.  The text should wrap under the text, not under the parenthesis.

 
                           FRANK
                    (the words catching
                     in his throat)
              I knew him.  We were in school
              together.
 

 

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Parenthetical direction should be short, no more than a few words, and not a complete sentence.  As such, it should not have the first word capitalized (unless it’s a proper name), nor should it end in a period.  If the direction is long enough to merit a complete sentence, then it should appear as an action element.

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Use parenthetical direction to indicate a speech is continuing.  When the same character speaks again in the same scene following some action, it’s customary for the word “continuing” to appear in parentheses on the next line after the cue.

 
                           VALERIE
              That's all right.  I like that
              you're, um... old-fashioned.

She puts her arms around his neck, kisses him softly.  Then shoves him away.

                           VALERIE
                    (continuing)
              What's the idea of getting two
              beds, anyway?
 
 

 

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It’s also acceptable to place the word “CONT’D” in parentheses as an extension to the character cue, but things can get messy if there’s already a “V.O.” or “O.S.” extension.

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Use a parenthetical beat, not just an ellipsis, to indicate hesitation or an adjustment in a speech.  Personally, this reader prefers the use of “(then)” instead of “(beat),” as it flows better and cues the actor that this is an adjustment.

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Song lyrics in dialogue should appear in quotes under the parenthetical direction "(sings)."

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If some parenthetical direction interrupts a line of dialogue, then the unfinished line should trail off in an ellipsis.  The line should pick up after the parenthetical with an ellipsis, as well:

 
                           COACH STRAW
              Tony, about my talk the other day,...
                    (beat)
              ... you are one of the young men I
              think has potential.
 

 

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Under no circumstances should ALL CAPS be used in parenthetical direction.

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Parenthetical direction always comes before a speech, never after.  If a character performs action at the end of their speech, it should be written as description or action, not as parenthetical direction.

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